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There’s a storm inside.
Heart palpitates rapidly-
breathless and dizzy.
Tornado grasps me.
My feet off the floor, I soar
high above the trees.
The earth grows smaller.
Flying past planets and stars,
I inhale moonlight.
Beams radiating
from my body and bursting
out of every pore.
I succumb to you,
spent and exhilarated,
riding your rocket.
Inspired by JW’s captivating poem, No Love For Twister – Click HERE to visit and follow his blog!
powerfull poem
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Thanks San! That was quite a trip. 🚀
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beautiful Haikus😃
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Rocketing into space can be beautiful. Thanks Sumit! 🌟 💫 ✨ ☄
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That’s a nice haiku series. I like how they work together too. My favorite is the third one. I especially like the line about inhaling moonlight. 🙂
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Yes, breathe in the moonlight; especially when you’re scared of the dark. It works wonders to shine the beams from your nostrils so you can see that there are no monsters. Thank you so much, BunK!
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That’s a cool idea. It reminds me a little of the cat bus’s eyes in the movie Totoro.
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WEIRD! I’ve never seen the movie, but just today, I drew an illustration and sent it to Fly that was based on the movie (it’s quite dark):
http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=totoro+monster&view=detailv2&&id=45DC676246C867AEDC8A95F84CABF4B69496A48F&selectedIndex=0&ccid=Nhjbyss7&simid=607996559403057580&thid=OIP.M3618dbcacb3b6341a9f22b258cc1af7ao0
Wow — what a coincidence! I think we just experienced a mind meld!! Wow!!! ❤
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That is a pretty dark version of Totoro, I must admit. I think I can top it for terror, though. (WARNING: this picture is spine-chilling.) 🙂
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(It’s the last one on the page!)
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Hahaha! Ronald McDonald is a clown, and I think clowns are very scary. You know what?! I also drew a clown today and sent it to Matt. I’m not kidding!!
The Totoro drawing was based on that dark one I sent you, but I did change it up a bit.
I wish I could post both drawings, but we haven’t published them, yet, so that’s the only reason why I can’t show you the evidence. 😦
The drawings don’t scare me — you do! 😀 Stop reading my mind, BunK.
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Wow! I didn’t know I had such amazing mind reading skills. I guess that must mean I can read other people’s minds but not my own. 🙂
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Great series of haiku. But now I’ve got that Talking Heads song in my (not talking) head.
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Thank you! Is it Moon Rocks you’re talking about — the space ships and levitation line?
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No. And She Was.
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OH YEAH! I remember this song. Good call, Chuckie!! I’m dancing. Thank you! xo
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OOoooo My………sigh
~~dru~~
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That’s what I usually say after the rocket has landed 🙂
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Sexy and spiritual – beautiful
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Are you talking about my poetry or yourself? — because both fit that description 🙂
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Your poem of course!
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Lol! You’re so much fun 😀
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Powerful words with a pretty sexy ending..Mr Fly’s photo, just right as always.
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Haha! I knew the rocket wouldn’t escape you 😀 Yes, Fly’s photos are quite the inspiration. xo
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An excellent set which hang together or separately
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I love how you make my poem sound like curtains! Thank you, Sir Knight 🙂
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🙂
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Great poems… keep soaring! ❤
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I soar whenever you’re around. Thank you, Iris. ❤
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🙂 It’s my pleasure! ❤
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My favorite line, “I inhale moonlight.” Beautiful–so sensory.
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Ah, your presence here is such a present! Thank you Merril. 🌙 ⭐️ 🌟 💫 ✨
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Awww. Thank you, Rose. 🙂
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You have quite the way of engaging the reader’s senses. Beautiful haiku.
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I like engaging the readers, but I wouldn’t buy them rings. Nope. That’s where I draw the line….. 😀
Thanks Oggy! 🌼 🌸 💐
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Blastoff!!!!!
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There was that, yes. Lol.
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They say re-entry is the most difficult part of a mission!
–FlyTrapMan–
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LOL! Clever.
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I felt the rhythm from first syllable till the last one of the last stanza…and it was even more beautiful when i read it out loud myself..
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I’m glad to hear you read it out loud, Mich! The last stanzas are when you really get loud. Practice practice practice. 😆 Thank you!
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Reblogged this on PenneyVanderbilt.
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Thanks always, Penney.
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Five terrific Haikus Rose.
And they can all stand alone.
Wonderful. 😎
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Thank you, Alan! Yes, all my haiku poems are quite self-functioning and independent. I’m so proud of them. 😍
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LOL.
I deserved that. ☺️
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What kind of rocket? Solid or liquid fuel?
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Hmm. I know some liquid is involved, and it’s quite dense. The rocket’s also a drone, so it’s hand guided by me.
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Ha! Watch out for premature ignition! Okay…this is getting ridiculous.
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😀 😀 😀 Yeah, the gyrating forces are now decelerating. The interplanetary probe has been docked.
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A manual docking maneuver requires great skill. Impressive.
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Oh my god.
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😀
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Beams radiating from the body, inhaling the moonlight – love the use of such captivating phrases. Awesome haiku – all of them Rose!
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Thank you Somali! Inhaling moonlight can be tricky — too much can burn the linings of your nostrils, so do inhale conservatively. 😀 xo
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Maybe I should leave this lovely quintet alone, but I succumb to the Muse of Naughty Doggerel …
With a rocket in her socket,
did she fly off past the moon?
No, the countdown left her earthbound
‘cuz the blastoff came too soon.
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HAHAHA! Nice one, Mel!! It’s hard not to be sucked into muses of naughty doggerel.
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Thsi was powerful. Every individua Haiku worked out so well as singles, they are perfect in a group.
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Haiku poems need to have fun, too! There’s a new poetic association called: Haiku Bacchanalian Orgy. Only poems with large vocabulary are inducted. 😀
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Well that will exclude me. I stay away from big words. lol
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They do allow massive dictionaries, so you may still have a chance!
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Breathless and dizzy
I inhale the moonlight
Out of every pore
Riding in your pocket
High above the trees
The Sheldon Perspective
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I’m breathless reading your poem! I hope you’re not in my back pocket — I just sat down. Lol. I’ve put you in my heart pocket, so you’re okay — for now! 😀 Thank you dear Sheldon. xo
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I almost fell off my perch, reading the above comments…I seem to think I had already responded to your post…but my pearly words seem to have evaporated. So…just to say that I almost fell of my perch, but why is the question.
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No, I see your previous comment. It’s in the midst of all the silliness going on. Sophomoric humor is one I seem to specialize in. My apologies.
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“I inhale moonlight”!! What a fascinating phrase, Rose! Simply love the use of words here. All the five haiku poems are unique…they are independent and yet the reader can find out a connection between them… kudos.. ❤
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I bow to your words, Mani! You have a kind heart, and I hope to learn from your gracious nature. Thank you! ❤️💋
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Aww…that’s so sweet of you dear… ❤
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Quite a journey. Could easily get lost in space 🙂
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As long as there are stars lighting our way, we shouldn’t be lost for too long. Lol. Thanks Inese! I don’t remember getting a notice from WP about your comment. I’m sorry for my delay. 🌹
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Rose, you know I love and always read your poems, so I don’t worry if my comment is lost in space somewhere 😉
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I’m grateful you read my work, Inese. Your words mean a lot to me. Have a lovely weekend! 😘
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You too, Rose, have a happy weekend! xx
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I love the thought of inhaling moonlight…
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That’s a safe way to get high. 😊
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Waving at you as you fly by….!
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Thanks Ted! Sorry for the late reply. I don’t remember getting a notice from WP. 😞
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So sensual! Take flight ❤
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I’m with Christy B. I found this exquisitely sensual! You have a gift.
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Such a sweet comment! Thanks very much.
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The picture and the haiku when read together, they make you float between the air and the magic. Very calm and serene.🌌
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Hi nice read! You can catch my work of short poems at https://soniyaagrawalblog.wordpress.com/ Would love to get your feedback!
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