When you look into my eyes,
do you see the dark?
You say there’s light in my skies,
but you don’t know what I’d do
if I could have you.
I’d take all your glimmer –
hide it in the shadows of fallen stars
and take delight as you grow dimmer.
Your crescent smile would fade
in my hands where a frown would form.
I’d dance in the gloom that I’ve made.
You’d stare at me with those big craters
in surprise when you realize
I never loved you, you silly moon.
(Photo from freeimages.com)
Sad, but beautiful
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It was quite the task for night to break up with the moon. I heard it was the moon’s fault (he flirted with Venus way too often!). Thank you, Derrick! 🌛 ❤ 🌜
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Ouch! And yet the moon still orbits, always watching, hoping that the night will change its mind.,, one day.
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Ah, sweet agony! Lol. Very nice, B!! xo
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Hmm, yes, the realisation that you are not loved is a hard lesson to learn. Beautiful poem Rose.
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Night can be quite the party pooper! Thanks Paula. 🌟 💫 ✨ 💘 🌟 💫 ✨
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I read this quite swiftly at first and enjoyed its humor, but reading it again, it was actually a very deep piece and very well thought out.
Brilliant as ever Rose ❤ x
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I appreciate how you take the time to visit and read my writings. Your input means a lot to me. Thank you very much, Joshua. 😍 🌙 💋
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Just your friendly neighbourhood poet here that is humbled by your writing most mornings 😘👌
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This one gave me a bit of a chill…in a good way. You excel at that sort of thing. Amongst your many other talents. 🙂
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Ah, Oggy, remember how I scared you the very first day we “met?’ I’m glad to see that I still give you chills! 😃 Thanks for your friendship and visits, my chilly friend. 🌙💝
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Thanks goes to you. You’re such a kind and helpful person. (And wicked.) 🙂
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Haha! I believe you’ve made me swoon 😜😃
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Well, you’re a habitual swooner, so I can’t claim credit. Just don’t hit your head; too many great thoughts in there.
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It gave me a “ahhhh sigh” feeling..
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The Night can be pretty brutal, at times. Salamat 😊💋
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Are you a filipino?
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Hindi po, bakit? Lol. Yes, I was born in Quezon City and came to America when I was four.
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It just makes me happy to find fellow filipino blogger… there are very few of us here… ingat lagi..
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🙂
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Because I just assume your poems will be great, I generally forget to even mention it these days. Every now and again, though, I suddenly remember that I should say so directly.
Drumroll, please
Rose, you’re poems are always great.
By the way, if you don’t want the moon, can I have it? I used to have a bedside light that I used when reading before going to sleep each night. It broke for some reason, but hanging the moon above my bed would probably do. I’m not sure how I’d turn it off when I put my book down, though.
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Lol. I do love drum rolls! Oh, BunK, no worries about paying me compliments, my darling! Your ability to make us laugh is the best gift of all. Yes, take the moon into your bedroom if that will make you happy 😜🌙❤️
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It might come to that if I can’t get my bedside light fixed. Trouble is, I’m not sure how I’d get the moon through the front door.
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I adore how you make me smile. xo
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😀
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The moon’s orbit is currently speeding up — angular momentum lifts the moon into a higher orbit (due to Earth spinning at a much faster rate than the moon) — resulting in an increased distance of about 3.8 cm per year…which means the moon will eventually drift away, but will unlikely never leave Earth’s orbit completely…
…which means…you’ll have to put up with the moon’s crescent smile…forever!!!! Hahahahaa
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I enjoy hearing about astronomy through your eyes. It’s very impressive to know someone who studies the skies as much as you do – then there’s that maniacal wit of yours which has a monstrous bite of its own.
The moon’s crescent smile is one I look forward to! Night is the one who has a problem with it. 😉 🌜⭐️🌌
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Yeah, I wouldn’t like the moon if I was the night…the view never changes! **Ba-dum ching!** You know…because of the moon’s tidally locked orbit!…nevermind.
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“…tidally locked orbit…” 😀
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You’re welcome! \”/
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OH!

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Sorry T! My poems can be mean, at times. Next time, wear a helmet 💋
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OK!

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Now THAT’S what I call a helmet! Haha!!
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Bravo, this was so good.
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Thank you. 😊 The moon is the star here. 💋
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Smiling. You are talented my friend.
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Takes one to know one! Seriously, thank you 😊
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An entertaining and sad piece Rose.
Really enjoyed. 🎭
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Ah, I look forward to your enjoyment. Thank you, Alan! 🌚🌝 ⭐️
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Great piece Rose
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Thanks Sheldon. 😊
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I’m not the best at analyzing poetry so it took me a second to understand it, but I was soo amazed when I finally got it 🙂
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🙂 I will apologize now, because you may read some stuff of mine that may make you cringe. Just keep saying your prayers before you sleep, and you should be fine! Lol.
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As always your finals changes everything. ^_^
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Thank you for taking the time to read until the very last line, dear Francis 🙂
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I love to be amazed by your poems. : )
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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The dark sky wanting to rob the moon of its light…sad ..but lovely,
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Thank you, Somali. 🌛 🌜
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there is no greater tragedy than unrequited love…poor moon…another brilliant piece
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Thank you! Yes, I completely agree. 🌚 🌝 🌛
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You are welcome:)
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May I ask some questions?
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Hi Amir! I’m sorry for the delayed response as your comment was in my Spam folder which I didn’t find until just now. Of course, you can ask me questions! I’ll be happy to answer them if I can. xo, Rose
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Hi Rose:)
I’m writing a short essay about women outfits. Do you wear stockings? If so, would you send me some pics of your stockings? I’m not allowed to use google images. Thanks! XO
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Lol. Sorry, Amir, I don’t wear stockings. Good luck with your quest, though! 😊
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Thanks, anyway;)
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