I heard you smiling
It crackled through the concrete
The sound scared my cat
*Today I made our grumpy neighbor smile. He asked me if I knew who parked a car in front of his house. I replied that I didn’t know, but it must be some idiots who have no idea what they’ve gotten themselves into.
Poet Rummager 
Lol…I’m laughing at your grumpy neighbor 🙂 “it crackled through the concrete” what a smile that must have been… Great line
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Thanks D! 💐🌸🌹
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Nice! Must be a very rare smile! I imagine a hardened grumpy face crackling when it was made to smile for the first time in years.
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Exactly and well put! Thank you, SW!!
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Love the commentary!
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Thanks Tosh! It was such an unexpected treat to see him smile that I had to write about it. Thanks for visiting! 🙂
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I really enjoyed the poem with the initial read. The commentary made me love it even more!
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very nice 😀
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Thank you Leyla 😊
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I love how we all have a neighbour like this 😀 To make them smile though! A feat surpassing the skill of the many 😀
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Nicely said! Thanks JT☺️
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The sound of smiling is a fun notion, and the haiku runs with it very well.
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Thanks Mr. C! It was a loud smile 😜💣
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Wit and humor, a wonderful combination!! Enjoyed your work.
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Thank you so much! I’ll check your blog out, as well 🙂
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I welcome the opportunity to share my non traditional approach to topics on health. I try to disprove the rumors that all doctors are boring and have no sense of humor. Feel free to be as brutally honest as you feel.
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Fascinating blog from the little peek I made of it. Will check it out more later as I just got back home. And yes, I will be brutally honest….cannot wait 😀
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