Sweet Deceit

She plucked the apple

He bit it; luscious and sweet

Watching, the snake smiled

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agenda19892010 says:

July 28, 2015 at 10:09 pm

☺ .

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the secret keeper says:

July 28, 2015 at 10:43 pm

Going Biblical. Cleverly put. Love it. jk 😀

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- Poet Rummager says:
  
  July 28, 2015 at 11:00 pm
  
  Thanks JK! My way of hoping God forgives me for the other nastier writings I pen from time to time 🙂
  
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  - the secret keeper says:
    
    July 28, 2015 at 11:28 pm
    
    I wouldn’t worry about having hesitations about expressing your thoughts. Release is essential from time to time, otherwise you might just explode. My head feels that way sometimes, like it will explode. So I would say you are forgiven. 🙂
    
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Poet Rummager says:

July 28, 2015 at 11:47 pm

Thank you dear JK! Yes, an exploded head would not be good, but hey, thanks for the idea for my next poem 😀

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tripleclicka says:

August 1, 2015 at 1:01 pm

Nice…

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