Five Haiku Poems – A Raging Epiphany

Painting by James Christensen

(His art was introduced to me through Inese’s lovely blog).

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An epiphany
raged through her, and she promised
never would he leave.

The dagger’s keen blade,
gleamed like a smile in the dark,
he caught in his eye.

Slowly oozing blood –
grief looming menacingly.
Tears, only respite.

Forever, my love,
she sobbed, falling on her knife.
Her life, too, bled out.

Throbbing melody
stops with a note unfinished.
Eternal silence.

Haiku poems by Scattered Thoughts (Mani) and Poet Rummager

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63 comments

  1. “Throbbing melody/stops with a note unfinished” Ahh, sigh…..music to my ears and the heart of love is pierced. Bon Jovi’s “Shot Through the Heart” popped into my head reading that!

    Although, and I hate to be picky, hahaha…but the pronouns in haiku one confused me. Sorry to be so fussy! haha *sheepish grin*

    “and she promised
    never would he leave.”

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  2. I groove to Bon Jovi every chance I get! Yes, the last haiku was Mani’s masterpiece. I love it, too.

    Ah, just read slower then, my love 😉 Thank you for visiting and commenting. I love to hear your thoughts. xo

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    • @Poet Rummager: Your page is put together nicely. Do you have any space on your page for adding a few of my works? or possibly a different website that includes works of authors you like/ work with ? You can also find me on Facebook:Tevin Ponder -T. Ponder

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  3. The two of you work very well together. I had a more difficult time determining who wrote what in this collaboration than any of the previous ones. Great haiku poems and the painting is beautiful.

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  4. Reblogged this on Scattered Thoughts and commented:
    Rose, an amazing story-teller, poet, artist and a wonderful human being, has started a series of collaborations on her blog with haiku poets. Here is our presentation, five haiku poems together.
    Read carefully to discover the story in this haiku poems…

    Thank you, dear Rose, ❤

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