I see how you are –
distant like the stars.
Brilliant pin points of you –
scattered.
I can’t contain you in my hands.
You escape between my fingers –
drifting through the air like
vapor.
You’re unattainable.
No matter how close I get,
you’re always out of reach –
enigmatic and complex.
At times you breeze past me,
rushing your caresses.
Our breaths mingling –
never lingering.
I can only graze your surface.
(Photo by Michael Murphy of freeimages.com)
Forever searching……believing.
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I enjoy how you pull me into your words. Thank you. 🌟 💫 ✨
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beautiful words:))) as usual
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Thank you for reading my work and commenting so sweetly. 🌼 🌸 💐
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Love this. The sincere longing and an almost understanding of the love just out of reach. You captured it with you beautiful lines. Always a pleasure reading your work. Take care.
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Thanks so much, Anthony! I, too, enjoy reading your poetry — I love how raw, captivating, and gritty your words are. All the best.
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A nevr ending chased………….. 🙂
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🙂
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Yes, trying to reach out and hold on to the impossible..I recognize it! Beautifully described with your poem. xx
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Thanks Paula. 😍 I hope you’re feeling better.
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You just keep getting better and better; reading this made me feel lonely in a room full of people. So lyrical. I loved it.
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I’ve missed you! You must still be traveling? This poem was written as I was feeling sorry for myself. Because of my husband’s hectic schedule, it’s tough to pin him down. He’s always on the go or his mind is constantly preoccupied. Boo hoo for me! Thank you. 😘
Hope you’re able to post soon on your blog. I miss your work!
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I’m sorry that you’re a bit sad, but it’s bringing out the best in you. You’re a great inspiration, as a writer and a person. My schedule is hectic as well, and my wife isn’t enjoying it, either; but rather than writing poetry, she chooses to employ a rolling pin; why did I have to buy her one made out of marble instead of wood? Ow! Gotta go! Best wishes. 🙂
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Oh, I’m fine, Og! Lol. It’ll slow down for him in the summer time then I’ll be handcuffing him to the bedpost. 😉 Ouch. Marble? Wow. I bet that’s the type of rolling pin she asked for knowing she could use it also as a weapon? Haha. Thanks darling. You always make me smile 😊
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Oh that unattainable! Brilliance, breeze and vapor! A perfect and very poetical explanation here 🙂 Have a wonderful week!
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Ah, thank you, Inese! Your comments mean a lot. Have a fantastic week, as well 😍
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Deep thoughts woven eloquently ! Brilliant !
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I appreciate your visit and comment! All the best. 🌷
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Like, a young lady and gentleman communicating for purposes other than acting on one another’s love appetites. I love your tapestry. Your poetry helps to cure my numbness to such appetites.
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What a wonderful comment! I appreciate you taking the time to read my work. I enjoyed your interpretation. 💐😊
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Oh, this was so beautiful. Loved having it read to me in such a sensual voice. Also, adored the finale. You ended this so perfectly.
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Haha! That was more like my “woe is me” voice! My husband works all the time that it can be challenging. I’m so happy you enjoyed my poem. I love your posts about your lovely wife, but I also enjoy your risqué poetry, as well. It’s fun to be a writer and explore so many facets of life. Hope all your projects go well! Thanks so much for your comments. I know how busy you are, so I appreciate it😘
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Smiling. It is a pleasure to read your work. Yes, it is fun being a writer. Exploring life, writing, and creativity. I try to keep my poems and messages fresh. You do it well.
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Yes, it’s thrilling to read your poetry since it’s always a surprise to see what you’ve written. Very refreshing and never dull. Thank you😍
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The illusion to be close… thank you, Rose. : )
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I’m happy you enjoyed my poem, dear Francis. 💋
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Always. : )
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You’re becoming quite the bard! How do you record your audio?
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Thanks! I have an app on my phone which I send to my email then download to my computer. Will you be reciting some poetry some day?
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Ohhh. I see. Hmmm…I’m not sure if I’ll be reciting any of my “poetry”…I don’t want to scare people! Haha.
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I think it would be fun! Was that you actually saying “shit” when your Bowie knife broke? Lol.
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Oops…you heard that? Yup! That was me…I mean…no…ummm…it was someone else \”/
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The eternal longing of achieving the unattainable…. so wonderfully expressed, Rose! Loved it…the picture goes perfect with the words… 🙂
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Thanks so much Mani! You made my night!!❤️
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Really very good. So lyrical. A sense of yearning, admiration and unattainability. I felt like this about a girl who was in a school play, when I was a boy. She was just out of reach. I was spellbound.
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Thank you! I loved your story!! I bet you were such a cute, little Scooj growing up. Did you ever see your crush later on in life or heard what happened to her?
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Not really. The school play was the musical The Fantastics. Whenever I hear any of the numbers from the musical, I am reminded of my crush. It is all a very long time ago.
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This was really great. I loved hearing it read out loud. I’ve thought of reading some of mine, too. But man do I hate the sound of my voice…
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Thank you! I hope you’d just give it a try. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you Penney 😊
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I loved your reading of your poem. The person you are writing about sounds romantic and mysterious, intriguing, difficult to grasp, and not very good for hugging.
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Thanks BunK ❤ My husband's a workaholic, but I do get a chance to hug him; just not as often as I'd like. That's when your humor comes in handy — I'd be lost without you! xo
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The poem is as enigmatic as the person described Rose! Is that your husband?
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Yes, Somali. He’s as brilliant as he is enigmatic. Thank you for reading my poem.
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Ah! That’s like a devoted wife ! 😀
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OH! It’s your husband.
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