44 thoughts on “You Won’t Let Go”

1. mopana on February 28, 2016 at 12:35 am said:

   Interesting haiku, Rose 🙂

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 12:38 am said:

     Thanks Monica! My shadow can be a pest, at times 😉

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     • mopana on February 28, 2016 at 12:43 am said:

       😉

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2. sheldonk2014 on February 28, 2016 at 12:42 am said:

   Love the imagery
   Great one rose

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 12:44 am said:

     Thank you Sheldon!

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3. Isolated_girl on February 28, 2016 at 12:48 am said:

   So nyc . : ) loved it

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 12:53 am said:

     I’m happy you like my nice haiku! 🙂 ✌️

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4. tomorrowdefinitely on February 28, 2016 at 2:45 am said:

   Most precise definition of shadow I’ve come across so far 👍🏼

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:06 am said:

     That’s cool you think that. Thanks! 😊

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5. Jackie Jain on February 28, 2016 at 3:02 am said:

   Wow Rose. . This is a very unique haiku. ‘Phantom without soul’ loved this term. Nice one! Have a beautiful Sunday. 🙂

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:08 am said:

     Thank you for stopping by, Jackie! I enjoy your positive energy. Have a super Sunday!! 😍

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     • Jackie Jain on February 29, 2016 at 12:10 am said:

       Thank you Rose 🙂

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6. ajppobrien on February 28, 2016 at 3:04 am said:

   An excellent Haiku Rose.
   😎😍😎

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:09 am said:

     Many thanks Alan! 😘

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     • ajppobrien on February 28, 2016 at 12:30 pm said:

       You’re so welcome Rose.
       My shadow said it would never
       fight your shadow. ☺️

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     • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 12:32 pm said:

       Lol. Darn! 😃

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7. oglach on February 28, 2016 at 4:03 am said:

   That’s a more powerful haiku than it appears on a first read. Lovely, dark and deep.

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:15 am said:

     Thanks so much!! My shadow’s very powerful. I wonder if mine fought yours, would mine win? ⚡️🌀🌚

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     • oglach on February 28, 2016 at 10:36 am said:

       Nope. 🙂

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8. michnavs on February 28, 2016 at 5:03 am said:

   It seemed to have more hidden thought than the shadow itself..

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:17 am said:

     You’ve gotta be careful with shadows. They like to steal and hide things! 😉

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9. crow on February 28, 2016 at 7:21 am said:

   Who’s doing the watching, though? You or the shadow? I like to think it’s ambiguous.

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   • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:20 am said:

     Yes! Let’s make it ambiguous. I like that!

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10. smilecalm on February 28, 2016 at 8:29 am said:

    invokes
    a feeling 🙂

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11. FlyTrapMan on February 28, 2016 at 8:46 am said:

    Interesting haiku! Never trust a shadow.

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    • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:22 am said:

      You’re right; shadows can be assholes.

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12. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder on February 28, 2016 at 12:58 pm said:

    Very interesting…’phantom with no soul’ – perfect!

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    • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 2:20 pm said:

      Thank you!

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13. thelonelyauthorblog on February 28, 2016 at 3:17 pm said:

    A stalker Haiku

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    • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 4:17 pm said:

      All shadows are stalkers.

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      • thelonelyauthorblog on February 29, 2016 at 5:57 am said:

        LOL

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14. quirkyshine on February 28, 2016 at 8:47 pm said:

    Nice haiku 🙂

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    • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 10:45 pm said:

      Thanks! 🙂

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15. Francis.R. on February 28, 2016 at 11:17 pm said:

    I always welcome the stalking of my loved one. xD

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    • Poet Rummager on February 28, 2016 at 11:18 pm said:

      Lol! That’s always a fun thing; you’re right. 😀

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      • Francis.R. on February 28, 2016 at 11:19 pm said:

        😀

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16. paula graham on February 29, 2016 at 10:39 am said:

    So good, as so often if not always!! xx

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    • Poet Rummager on February 29, 2016 at 2:23 pm said:

      Thanks so much! xo

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17. kazelee28 on March 3, 2016 at 1:18 am said:

    “Phantom with no soul” – this caught my attention. A very creative way of giving meaning to your shadow..😊 You have that ability of surprise and wonder..💞

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    • Poet Rummager on March 6, 2016 at 1:58 pm said:

      Sorry! Your comment was in my Spam folder 😦 Thank you for your sweet words!! 🙂 ❤

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      • kazelee28 on March 6, 2016 at 4:11 pm said:

        😍

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18. BunKaryudo on March 4, 2016 at 5:41 am said:

    Sounds like a shadowy figure. Incidentally, that’s an unusual design on that lady’s blouse.

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    • Poet Rummager on March 4, 2016 at 3:55 pm said:

      Lol! You should see her pants 🙂 👖

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      • BunKaryudo on March 5, 2016 at 6:20 am said:

        Not sure I dare look. 🙂

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