I thought about you today
when the ground was cold
and the snow kept falling.
I remember kissing you
and thinking how could lips
that feel so good, tell lies so well?
I thought of you in my garden –
deep in the hole I buried you.
I donโt think your lips feel so good anymore.
Photograph by FlyTrapMan (Click here to visit and follow his blog). โค
If you are trying to be chilling…it worked!
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Haha! Just having some fun๐
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Ha ha ha! I love that!
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Thanks! I had a great time writing this — glad you enjoyed reading it๐๐ธ
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A garden of poisoned flowers… Thank you, Rose ^_^
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Watch out for those flowers, Francis ๐ Thank you, my Peruvian friend!
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I will be careful ๐
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Brilliant! THAT’S vengeance!
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Thanks B! ๐ท ๐ผ ๐ธ
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Moving poem , with a startling ending, suitably enhanced by sad sunflower by Mr Trap. One man’s poisoned flower is another’s dream.
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Thank you Paula! Yes, Fly’s flower was quite the inspiration ๐
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This is beautiful, Rose. Just like you. โค๏ธ
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And creepy; don’t forget creepy!๐ So happy to see you back on the saddle again. Missed you so!! Thank you, Sakshi. โค๏ธ๐
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I missed you Rose. I’m happy to be back again! ๐
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Love the imagery
Great piece
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Thanks Sheldon. ๐ท
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You don’t take kindly to lies, then?
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Can you tell? Haha!๐
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Let’s just say I’ve begun screening all my comments for accidental fibs that might have slipped through.
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LOL!! Don’t bother! — you’d look so good in my garden. ๐พ ๐บ ๐ป๐พ ๐บ
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(Gulp)
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Just desserts as they say. Beautifully written and perfectly ended piece Rose โค x
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I do love my desserts! Thank you Joshua. ๐ฉ๐ก๐ฅ๐ง๐๐
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Ooh, spooky and cool! Thanks T. ๐
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Dark and delicious Rose.
Great twist.
Always bury ’em deep. ๐
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Lol. The deeper the better! Thanks Alan. ๐ปโค๏ธ๐ผ
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Awesome. You make my day :))
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Oh, thank you, Monica. ๐ผ ๐ธ ๐๐ผ ๐ธ
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Are you the same person I read a second ago in the other poem…..
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Yes, Charly. What are you drinking ๐
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Just some rum, itยดs laready 10 a.m! Give me a brake…..
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I hope youโre having some bacon and eggs with that rum โ that would make it a breakfast of champions!
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Itยดs all included, no worries Iยดm always prepared.
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so impish
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Don’t be hating on the dead guy’s lips ๐
Also I thought this was posted on January 2016 but I thought this was 2016………
Err.. basically.. I got confused and thought this was a vision of the future.
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That’s funny! I’m actually nervous about 2017, so I don’t blame you wanting it to still be 2016.
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Haha I was just confused, probably sleepy. Hmmm… bring on 2017 I say. Why are you nervous?
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Sigh. The orange troll for our president is not a thought that is calming, my love.
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Ehh good luck ๐ … Seriously though worrying is not going to help ^_^
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