Celestial stars, what secrets you must have seen!
Shining steadfast in the dark yet silent you’ve been.
The earth below turns slowly within your visibility.
How I must amuse you with my heart’s fragility!
I’m broken with no light radiating from my soul.
Would you impart a ray of glimmer I may hold close?
Where darkness has resided in my life,
I ask for two tiny stars I may keep in my eyes.
**Open mic at Crow’s blog! (Click here to visit and follow his blog). ❤
***Photograph by FlyTrapMan (Click here to visit and follow his blog). ❤
Poet Rummager 
lovely work
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Thanks San 🙂
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Hi
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Hi Amir! Sorry; your comments are still going to my spam folder.
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Excellent as always, Rose.
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Thanks Charles! Your open mic invitation is a terrific idea.
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Here’s some stars for you to pick for your eyes.
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Gorgeous stars! How am I going to just choose two? Thanks sweet T💋⭐️⭐️
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Particularly nice ending
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I’m glad you enjoyed the ending. 😊. Thank you, Derrick.
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“I ask for two tiny stars I may keep in my eyes”. Love this!!
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Ah, I appreciate your visit and kind words! 💐💝
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It was my pleasure ❤
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“I ask for two tiny stars I may keep in my eyes.” – I love this line Rose ❤
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Thanks Princess Monica! 💋🌷👑
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You’re welcome, my dear Rose ❤
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The stars, the stars, they have so much on their conscience and they would probably glow with pride if they knew how much their every twinkel was analysed by us. xx Lovely poem.
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You’re right! We, poets, love to write about the twinkling of stars. Well said, Paula! Thank you❤️💝
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this is so amazing…loved it..:)
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I’m happy you enjoyed my poem! Many, many thanks😍
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pleasure ..:)
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Yikes! Don’t keep a tiny star in your eye…it’s unhealthy! \”/
The quality of your audio improved. Your voice was much sharper. Do you have difficulty recording footage? I’m sure it takes you a few tries, right? I think it would take me more than a few tries! Haha.
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lol. There’s a phrase, “stars in her eyes” that refers to someone who’s happy and optimistic.
Thank you! I actually recorded it in my bro’s walk-in-closet. You suggested a closet, but no way would I last in a tiny, claustrophobic one. Haha! It usually takes me 2-3 attempts. I do practice out loud before recording.
I’m waiting on pins and needles for your audio! Hurry up, I don’t like being a pin cushion. 😀
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Ha — I was going to ask if you recorded your audio in a closet! I guess it works. 2-3 attempts? That’s it? I think it would take me more than five tries. I have a feeling I would speak too quickly and not clearly pronounce my words. Your pronunciation is pretty clear.
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You never know until you try! I wish you would… Thank you. xo
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Very true! I’ll record audio…ummm…someday! Haha
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Lovely voice, and stellar poem Rose, thank you. *o*
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Thanks so much, Francis. Your turn! 😘
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Hehe, I don’t want to destroy your ears ///n/// but here it is http://vocaroo.com/i/s0NUBXk1d2oQ
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You sound so happy, and I love your little laugh at the end! Very cute 🙂 Thank you so much.
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Thank you, I had forgotten about it ^_^
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But it’s so unforgettable 😉
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The last line says it all…loved it… 🙂
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Thanks Mani! xo
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Another amazing analogy of the dark but starry nights 🙂
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For you and the stars in your eyes 🙂
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A starry poem and the last line is simply awesome!
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Thank you very much Somali. 😘
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Lovely write. Love those last two lines.
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Thank you, Andrew!
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I agree with the chimp
Simply beautiful
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Thanks Sheldon!
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