When you trust someone,
do you eventually open the door to your closet?
Do you ask the skeletons to come out
and have tea?
Or is it best to take one bone out at a time
and give little hints of the issues that plague you?
I like that closets have keys.
I lock away the things that scare me.
At times, the skeletons knock; politely at first.
Please, may we come out?
I ignore them and soon the knocking
becomes banging,
door knobs are rattling,
hinges are squeaking –
until the skeletons arenβt in the closet
like they should be but are now in plain view.
When that person you trust most finally meets your skeletons,
what will you do?
***This poetry was inspired by Sheldon Kleeman’s mesmerizing poem, Become:
All good questions. In terms of the parting one, I guess you hope that the most trusted person knows full well that damn near everyone has skeletons in their closet, and accepts them as a part of you.
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Wonderful answer, Alexander! Thank you for your visit and comment. π
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This is great
I am humble that I inspire you
As always Sheldon
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Your poetry is very inspirational. I enjoy your work! Thank you Sheldon π
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“I’m not worried,” laughed Bun. “I’ve lived a fairly blameless life. Have a look if you must. All I’ve got in there are two lumbar vertebrae and a tibia.”
So she opened the door.
Out tumbled a brontosaurus.
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Haha!! You’re always so witty, and you manage to steal the spotlight every time, my hilarious & sweet BunK!
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It was such a clever and intriguing poem, you see. Like all the best poetry, it made me think. Sadly, when I considered the skeletons in my own closet, I couldnβt help but notice the uncomfortably large number of bones involved.
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Thank you π By Jove, you must have a brontosaurus excavation site in your closet, then! π Get your boys to help dig… or not. I’m not sure it’s a healthy thing for sons to see their dad’s skeletons!
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I think I might keep it buried in the museum vaults. Safest place for it. π
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This is so beautiful and wonderful expressed. I’m sure everyone can relate to this… When the person I trust finally meet my skeletons; there is not much to do but to own it and hope they understand I’m human and have a past like everyone does π Cheers. Thanks for sharing Rose
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Oh, your kind words make me smile, darling Deanne! You’re so right; I shall own it π Thank you for visiting and commenting. I love hearing from you. β€
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I am far too innocent to have any skeletons in
my proverbial closet Rose. Lol.
But you have made me stop and think!
There was that one time…..
Really enjoyed the story. π
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Innocent, Alan? Lol. Um, okay… it is the Christmas season, so I shall be kind and nod my head in “complete” agreement. haha! Thank you. π
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My first reaction to letting the skeletons out of the closet is to evaluate their structure and alignment and adjust any segments where spinal subluxations are found. They are so much easier to deal with when aligned properly and feeling good!
You blend humor with important questions that each of us has to contend with. Humans are fallible. We are designed PERFECTLY to live lives of imperfection. How we share these imperfections with each other often depends on how we feel about our own lives. Those who really know us and care about us are willing to accept the past as the past and move forward in life with us and the person we have resolved to become, often, as a result of the past.
You have a wonderful skill to create meaningful art by using levity to reduce the fear that might otherwise be experienced by the reader. Great job!
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Lmao! Yes, I can actually see you aligning the spines of those skeletons!!
I love your words: “We are designed PERFECTLY to live lives of imperfection. How we share these imperfections with each other often depends on how we feel about our own lives.”
Thank you, Dr. J! Your eloquence is always thrilling, and your wisdom; so inspiring. β€
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When you are secure within yourself you might show one or two skeletons, however most people leave their skeletons in their closet as it is in the past and what is the purpose of bringing those skeletons out of the closet. However if the person you have engaged in conversation has the same skeleton in their closet I would think a sharing of skeletons and knocking of bones would take place.
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Thank you!
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When the person I trust most finally meets my skeletons, what will I do?
Add them to the collection and shove her in the closet π β€
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Hahaha!! You’re always so sweet that I had to do a double take at your hilarious words. Wow! I very much enjoyed your edginess, JT. Gold star π π
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When they finally see my skeletons I wonΒ΄t do anything, but the other person would probably jump into the car and speed away as fast as they can. So better keep somethings locked up.
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Haha! Your skeletons are wild ones, I bet, and they will probably chase after that car. π Thank you for visiting. I enjoy your humor!
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Skeletons from the closet sometimes just appear on the wrong side of the door. The door is still intact, as are the lock and the hinges. Quantum tunneling is not only for electrons.
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Haha!! I’ve missed you! xo
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When I think of something to add, I add it. Otherwise I just click the [Like] button and let my old fingers rest.
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