Day tugs off her dress
Arches her back and stretches
She melts into night
Wowee! Great poem, too
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Lol. Glad you enjoyed, Derrick. 😊
Beautiful representation of the day! It’s among the dozens of haikus I really appreciate.
And it’s nice to see you back. :3
I love watching Day transform herself. Thanks for reading my poem!
I think she changed form
Yes, Day is magical!
Oh my goodness, I love the perspective on this one!
Writing the haiku was lots of fun! I only wish I’d time to illustrate it, as well. Thank you!
Hi there qbit! Thank you for reading my poem.
What a lovely image you created in this poem!
Thanks Merril! Watching Day melt is a thing of beauty. 🌖
I love this!
Smiling big time🌞. Thanks so much Morgaine.
Night moves me… such is why I’m partially nocturnal.. jc
Same here! Watching Day into Night is a thing of beauty.
With her hooves hidden in her boots ❤
You know it, mon cher. ❤️😊
He he he ma cherie
Lots to think about there. Beautifully expressed, as always.
Ahhh, my day isn’t complete until I read your comment. A million thanks. 💋
Always so much to say with so few words. The mark of a master.
I think you got a rise out of Derrick.
Haha haha 😂 Derrick is so fun!! Thank you darling Og. xx
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
Thanks so much!
Always a pleasure, My Dear
Beautiful haiku, my dear poet so precisely constructed with love and ability.
Many thanks Paula! I can almost hear Day sighing after a long hard day of work.
She gives the night a drop of mischief I suspect. I love haikus, is like being hit once by an enlightening hammer. Thank you, Rose. Hugs of Peruvian spectacled bear ((Tremarctos ornatus : D)
You are a Casanova with your words, Francis! Blushing profusely. Yes, Day is full of mischief; especially when Night appears. 😀
Cool! I never heard of the Tremarctos Ornatus. It’s so cute and speckled!! Thank you and bear hugs, my sweet Peruvian friend. xo
Hello! Thanks for visiting.
You’re very welcome!
Awesome blog! I thoroughly enjoy thought provoking literature.
If you’re interested I’d like you to read my poetry blog?
Thanks! Yes, I’d like to read your poems.
Hope you like it
I’ll visit later tonight.
Nice. Love the halloween hair, BTW 🙂
Hello Graham! Someone I loved was born on Halloween and passed away last July. My gravatar honors him. Thank you ☺️
A lovely tribute.
melting into night like a warm bath, love it 😀
Don’t forget your rubber ducky! 🐥🛁 Thanks Josh. xo
Beautiful piece of art
Thank you for reading my poem!
I know its about day and night but something tells me its passionate and sensual…lol.
.maybe its just me..
Yes! You read my haiku superbly. Thanks Mich. 😊
Your poetry is a beautiful prompt, dear friend! Be safe!💕☕️☕️
Thank you, my Java friend! Stay safe, as well. 💋
My pleasure with s mutual cup of strong coffee! Your words are a beautiful journey! Wow-wee! Be safe as well! ❤️🎶
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