Day tugs off her dress
Arches her back and stretches
She melts into night
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Day tugs off her dress
Arches her back and stretches
She melts into night
Poet Rummager 
Wowee! Great poem, too
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Lol. Glad you enjoyed, Derrick. 😊
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Beautiful representation of the day! It’s among the dozens of haikus I really appreciate.
And it’s nice to see you back. :3
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I love watching Day transform herself. Thanks for reading my poem!
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I think she changed form
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Yes, Day is magical!
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Oh my goodness, I love the perspective on this one!
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Writing the haiku was lots of fun! I only wish I’d time to illustrate it, as well. Thank you!
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Excellent!
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Hi there qbit! Thank you for reading my poem.
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What a lovely image you created in this poem!
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Thanks Merril! Watching Day melt is a thing of beauty. 🌖
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❤
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I love this!
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Smiling big time🌞. Thanks so much Morgaine.
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Night moves me… such is why I’m partially nocturnal.. jc
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Same here! Watching Day into Night is a thing of beauty.
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With her hooves hidden in her boots ❤
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You know it, mon cher. ❤️😊
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He he he ma cherie
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Lots to think about there. Beautifully expressed, as always.
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Ahhh, my day isn’t complete until I read your comment. A million thanks. 💋
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Always so much to say with so few words. The mark of a master.
I think you got a rise out of Derrick.
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Haha haha 😂 Derrick is so fun!! Thank you darling Og. xx
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks so much!
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Always a pleasure, My Dear
xoxo
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Beautiful haiku, my dear poet so precisely constructed with love and ability.
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Many thanks Paula! I can almost hear Day sighing after a long hard day of work.
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She gives the night a drop of mischief I suspect. I love haikus, is like being hit once by an enlightening hammer. Thank you, Rose. Hugs of Peruvian spectacled bear ((Tremarctos ornatus : D)
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You are a Casanova with your words, Francis! Blushing profusely. Yes, Day is full of mischief; especially when Night appears. 😀
Cool! I never heard of the Tremarctos Ornatus. It’s so cute and speckled!! Thank you and bear hugs, my sweet Peruvian friend. xo
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Really awesome!
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Hello! Thanks for visiting.
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You’re very welcome!
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Awesome blog! I thoroughly enjoy thought provoking literature.
If you’re interested I’d like you to read my poetry blog?
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Thanks! Yes, I’d like to read your poems.
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https://theeclecticcontrarianonline.wordpress.com
Hope you like it
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I’ll visit later tonight.
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Ok!
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Nice. Love the halloween hair, BTW 🙂
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Hello Graham! Someone I loved was born on Halloween and passed away last July. My gravatar honors him. Thank you ☺️
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A lovely tribute.
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melting into night like a warm bath, love it 😀
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Don’t forget your rubber ducky! 🐥🛁 Thanks Josh. xo
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Beautiful piece of art
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Thank you for reading my poem!
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I know its about day and night but something tells me its passionate and sensual…lol.
.maybe its just me..
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Yes! You read my haiku superbly. Thanks Mich. 😊
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😊😊😊
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Your poetry is a beautiful prompt, dear friend! Be safe!💕☕️☕️
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Thank you, my Java friend! Stay safe, as well. 💋
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My pleasure with s mutual cup of strong coffee! Your words are a beautiful journey! Wow-wee! Be safe as well! ❤️🎶
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Metamorphosis!
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