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I saw it there in the distance. A streak of luminescence in an otherwise dismal world. I hungered for it; staring unblinking. It moved closer – that brilliant glow. Holding out my hand, I touched the edge of his collar. It was then I realized, the light came from his soul.
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How can someone not fall in love with this?
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Yes, it’s hard not to love a soul you can use as a flashlight when your lights go out. 😃 Thanks very much, Sakshi! I’ll contact you soon about your fine work that will be posted on SlasherMonster soon. xo
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Ahaa, eagerly waiting Rosieee! 😀
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Great read Rose
Simply beautiful
As always Sheldon
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Thank you Sheldon. I’m happy you’re enjoying reading my writings. That means a lot. 🌹
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Wow. Your 50 word stories speak volumes.
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Literally! Haha
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You can always lower the volume if it gets too loud. Lol. Thanks for reading… er, listening. 👂
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Don’t go toward the bright light! Trust me.
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I think this bright light will come in handy when wanting to light up a dismal part of a closet or under the bed. 💡
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Whoa! Turn off the light! No one should look underneath a skeleton’s bed.
–FlyTrapMan–
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Hmm. I’d like to light up your bare bones, DD 😆
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Why am I red? Oh! I’m blushing!
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Quality recording! Nice job!
Light can be tricky — you never know what lurks behind the glow…it could be an angler fish!
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I sometimes get this annoying sing song quality in my voice when I’m reciting something. It’s a feat to try and avoid that. Thank you!
You’re right! Lol. Or it can be an electric eel. Run! or… Swim!!
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Your pronunciation is clear and you don’t use filler words — those particular aspects of your speaking are acutely developed.
Electric eel! My favorite! Zap!
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Thank you, bro! Here’s a Pink Lady: 🍎 (tosses it). Good catch. I remember how much you like eels. So bizarre.
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No problem! I haven’t had one of those in a long time! I’m eating the organic green apples these days. Honeycrisp apples are also available, but they’re expensive.
Electric eels can mysteriously shock their victims without shocking themselves, and no one knows how they do it.
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I’m sure the Pink Ladies are weeping for your attention and bites 😀
Electric eels just don’t shock easily, I guess!
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He sounds a bright, cheery soul.
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I love cheery souls almost as much as a cheery glass of wine! Haha. Cheers, BunK. 🍷
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Cheers! I really like the wine glass icon, by the way, Rose. I wish I could do clever stuff like that. I can do smiley faces, though. 😀 🙂 😀
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I love smiley faces! ❤
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Yay! My speciality!
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Wow. Powerful. Love this. So well done with so few words.
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Thanks! I spied your 100 word story. Superb! I tried writing one, but it’s just 50 more words too long for me. Lol.
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LOL These short formats atr a challenge. You do it well.
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Thank you 🙂
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Great poem. And what a lovely voice. I’ll add it to my collection later. 😍
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Thanks Chuckie! I so enjoy your open mic link. It was cool listening to a Spanish poet last month. 😎🎤
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It was. I hope he comes back.
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A wonderful and uplifting
piece of writing Rose.
Loved it. 😎
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Thanks Alan! It’s a good thing you’re wearing sunglasses, these souls leaving comments, are much too bright. 🕶🔦
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Always an honor to read what you write. ^_^
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Aw, thanks Sin! Glad to see you out and about. You must be feeling better!
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Beautifully written….
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Thanks a bunch! Keep your lovely soul bright. 🐦 ☀️
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The light of the soul, the essence of one’s existence. The light we all crave for!
Loved the audio as well, you have a graceful voice… ❤
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Thank you Mani! You always have such positive things to say that make me soar like a happy bird. 🐦 ❤
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Yay….that made me happy too… ❤
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Rose..a beauty, my complete admiration. xx
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That’s lovely to read, and it touches my soul which needs to be brighter, so many thanks, Paula! xo
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thanks Penney!
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I agree with Crow…lovely voice. Your story was beautiful to read, and doubly so when listened to. This one touched me, Rose.
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I’m dancing! Thanks for the sweet words, Cathy. 💋
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You’re most welcome. ❤️
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Thanks for your kind gesture, Rose; a magic light in your friendship, as grabbing a rainbow, and a pleasure in reading your words. ^_^
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I’ve missed you and hope you’re doing well. Has work been busy? Enjoy the magic light! Besos, Francis ❤
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I am fine fortunately, and happier reading you : ) Yes, work is my tyrant xD but fun days. Thanks for everything, wishing you a wonderful weekend. Besos. ^^
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I’m always smiling when you visit. Thank you, and have a great weekend, too!!
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The streak of light came from his soul! It must be written about Dead D! I think he has a beautiful soul!
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DD does have a beautiful soul! Quite right, and I know he’ll be so happy to read your sweet comment.
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