You shake your head
as you eye my heart –
poking it with a finger.
I don’t cringe or fall apart –
stone cold like a glacier.
Wall of ice in all four chambers.
In my veins, my blood runs blue.
Sludge and frost circulate
in zero degrees centigrade.
You grab my hand and shiver,
yet you never let go.
The deep concern in your eyes
thaws me and stops the snow.
Cheering quietly, you watch my ice
inevitably melt and liquefy.
I’ve put away my hat and gloves —
I’m warm now; thanks to you, my love.
(Photo by Ann-Kethrin Rehse from freeimages.com)
Nice one!
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Thanks! Sometimes I can find a little bit of nice thoughts inside. It never lasts long, so enjoy. 😃
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AWW! Sweet.
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You’re sweet! Thanks. 🌷
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🌷Right back at you.
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what no gloves or hat
Next it will be……cold is not a temperature
It’s a disposition
Waiting for a warm heart
Have a great weekend rose
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You’re very literal today😉. Have a super weekend, Sheldon!
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I still have yet another poem to post
I haven’t written this in quite some time
It’s somewhere about 500 words +
I’m on a roll
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Roll with it, baby! I’ve noticed how busy you are. Keep them coming; better than smoking. 😊
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That’s romantic. I guess the first step in any relationship is breaking the ice.
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Lol! That’s right! Oh, and pretending to be nice😀
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Oh, yes! My wife tells me she dimly remembers my pretending to be nice. 🙂
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Haha! I’m sure you’re always a gentleman. 😊 Well, maybe if donuts aren’t involved. 🍩
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Haha, exactly! 🙂
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nicely executed poem
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Thanks for the inspiration!
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Welcome
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Antifreeze…miraculous stuff.
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Ha! So clever. 😊
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Love can melt anything. Nicely written 💖
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Yes, it can; keep it away from ice cream! Thank you😍
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Good point lol although I do like creamy ice cream 🙂 You’re welcome!
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😊🍧
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I really like this, especially the first lines. And you worked in a shoutout to your hat!
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Thank you. Lol. I knew you’d catch that!😃
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So Nice Poem, stay blessed…
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Thanks! You, too. 🌷
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Welcome 🙂
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Such a sweet poem Rose.
Not a dark thought in sight. 😟
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I’m sorry! lol. I dropped the ball, didn’t I? 💀😔
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Lol. It’s a lovely poem Rose.
I’m just teasing.
Did you receive my email regarding graveyards? 💀💀
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I know you were joking. I was just being silly 😊. I did get your message, Alan. Thank you so much, and I’ll respond soon.
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Happy ever after!! Lovely poem to melt anyone’s heart.
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Thanks Paula. 😊
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A happy end and beggining in blue. I liked it so much, thank you, Rose. n_n
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My poems like you, too, Francis. 😍 Thanks so much.
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^w^
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thanks so much, Penney!
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“I’ve put away my hat and gloves —
I’m warm now; thanks to you, my love.” Awww how true😍
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Lol. Thank you, Mr. Ahmed. ❤
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Pleasure always mine dear One nways u look quite different 😉
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I hope that’s a good thing? 🙂
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Ummm!! Indeed….
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A great frigid write. Love the line about the wall of ice in all four chambers.
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Thanks dear Andrew! xo
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I’m so glad this explains the hat hahaha 😀
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Aha! So now I know what made you put away your hat. Nice one rose – especially the description of the refrigerated heart.
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