There it was again; a faint call for help. Sebastian raced down the path of trees towards the cemetery. He stopped at a tombstone. With his front paws, he began digging in the dirt. Below, Diane’s soul cried out as she was being pulled deeper into the depths of hell.
Photograph by FlyTrapMan (Click here to visit and follow his blog). ❤
Poet Rummager 
Animals do hear the cries and whispers of the dead
If not the spirits too
As always Sheldon
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Yes! Spooky and cool. 👻 🐶
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Oh yes the lady of many hats
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Damn, this was dark! Hey, I like it. I need to try to write some of these micro fiction pieces. Good work.
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I’d love to read your nasty and/or dark micro fiction! I’d even make popcorn. Thank you!💋
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Hahaha Thanks for saying that.
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Oh dear, how moving. A rescue , indeed impossible.
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Poor Sebastian can only try. Such a sweet pup! 😘
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Sebastian should keep digging and follow her!
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Oooh. Now that would make a fantastic story! 🔥🐾🔥
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Yessss — you need to write it!
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I shall! Thanks so much for the idea.
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OMG this is just simply amazing 🙂
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Thank you! It didn’t scare you at all? 🙂
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I love horror stuff 😀
Scared me a bit. But it’s fantastic 😀
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Not only are you lovely, you’re so much fun, too! ❤ I appreciate your words, Pratyusha.
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Haha. You are fun tooooo 😀
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Even the pic is so lonly
Isolated
N
Horror-ful
Wow! How short
How fierce!
And
Suspense…!
Truly; there is no limit
For the beauty of words
Transform it!
However
Wherever
Amazing!
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Ah, your words are so sweet! Thank you for taking the time to write them — I couldn’t be more pleased ❤
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Excellent
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Thank you Derrick! xo
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Sebastian has love for the person and not the deeds. True love, unjudging.
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Well stated! Sebastian is a true hero.
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What a good dog. It’s like Lassie, only with demons and stuff. 🙂 🙂
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Haha! You got it, BunK. 😈👻
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Now, I’m wondering, “what happens next?”, which is essential in any good story to keep a reader turning those pages. Can Sebastian save Diane from hell? Dogs are amazing creatures, so maybe he can….I suppose I will never know…sigh.
A great micro story, Rose.
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Fly actually commented earlier about Sebastian following Diane into hell, and I’m halfway finished with the full story, so I’ll definitely share it in some form. No need to sigh, dear Cathy! Lol. You’re so cute 🙂
Thank you so much!!
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Good! I’m looking forward to reading it. I like all things weird–if they are well-written, like yours. 😀
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thanks Penney!
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That truly was an excellent
piece of flash fiction Rose.
Nice and dark as well. 💀💀💀
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Oh, I appreciate your words, dear Alan, and I’m happy you enjoyed it! It’s like Halloween again — ah, I miss that special day 🎃
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Damn! The dog heard her! And the photo, lovely!
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Thanks T! Yes, dogs hear things we can’t. Fly’s photo is fabulous!
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This one gave me the chillllls, what inspired you to write it? 🙂
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I’m happy to hear you got the chills reading my microfiction! 😀 Last month, I visited my mom in Connecticut and also toured the town of Woodbury with FlyTrapMan where we walked through very old graveyards. Yeah, fun stuff! Lol. Fly’s story also inspired me:
https://flytrapman.wordpress.com/2016/04/20/take-a-look-at-this/
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Thanks! I will definitely check it out haha
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Thats a good one. Nice ender 🙂
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Thank you, Lion!
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Great story! Your outing was very productive!
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Thank you! It was quite productive 🙂
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uh ah, this is so simply told and yet so devastating…
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