Saw a shooting star!
Before I could make a wish,
Tom Cruise had shot me.
My lame attempt to impress Bunkaryudo.
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Ha, ha…Love you wit!! xx
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โค Thank you.
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Wow! Beautiful. No need to make a wish. Tom Cruise was there ๐
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You’re so cute! Thank you, Monica. ๐บ ๐ธ
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haha…I did not expect that twist at the end…
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I’m glad it made you laugh ๐
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yes, it did ๐
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Yay! I got a poem! I got a poem!
The truth is, of course, that I’ve always been impressed by your poems, particularly since I’ve never been able to write them myself. I like the way you often turn things around at the end unexpectedly. (In your short stories too.)
You also have much more of an emotional range than I do. You can be funny and playful, intense, angry or even a bit scary! I basically always just sound like me.
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I was inspired by our conversation of trying to outmatch wits which of course, you won hands down! We have so much fun going back and forth, and I absolutely am mad about your blog.
Yes, this poem is all yours. xo
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I always love back and forth comments. I never think of it as a battle of wits, though, just a funny conversation. My wife says she’ll sometimes see me typing away at my computer. Suddenly, I’ll start sniggering (like Muttley in The Wacky Races). Then I’ll quietly type some more. A few minutes later, there’s another round of sniggering. It’s fun!
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Haha! I was only teasing you, silly!! Lol. I do the same when I’m writing, but I also end up eating cake, too. ๐ You’re so charming, BunK, and your wife knows what a treasure you are, I’m sure.
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I hope she knows. She should do because I remind her often enough. ๐
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Ha. So typical of Mr Cruise. Why are short people born of aliens and seeded in volcanoes so damned angry? It must be an orgone imbalance or something.
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Lol. I actually like some of Cruise’s movies. I’ve never gotten the Scientology stuff, but I like peanut butter on banana slices, so I guess that makes me weird to some ๐ Good hearing from you, Nick! xo ๐ ๐
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XD
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Ooh, you’re getting fancy with your emoji! ๐
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An image says more than one thousand words ( อกยฐ อส อกยฐ)
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Ah, you are an artist, dear Francis! ๐ญ ๐จ
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Thank you. Hehe, but I copy-paste the emojis
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Ssh! I want to pretend it took you hours; just for me ๐
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Haha, I can do it without copying (>^_^)>
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Such a clever Haiku.
And very funny.
I bow to your talent. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you, Alan. Lol. It still has the dark element we love so well. ๐โค๏ธ
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Tom cruise…. the shooting star … beautiful metaphor
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Thank you very much! xo
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